Art, Child loss, Life, parenting, Writing

Jack’s Work of Art: A Poem for Corrie’s Father

The circle of men crowded the museum 

for the first time in five years to judge

the work of art. They gathered around 

the work by Jack after 

the curators of 

the museum had promised Jack that 

every color,

every edge, 

and blur could possibly lead to 

his own exhibit.

For they claimed they were the 

experts 

of fine art, and they had much

to say on the piece 

the curators had placed.

One man stood up from a bench, 

and said, “It looks the same as

the piece he’d painted 

eleven

years ago. What a piece of … “

“Junk,” said another as he pulled

out his pocket watch to check 

the time, and a boy walked by.

“I’ve never seen anything like 

that,” the boy said. 

“Do you call that art?” 

The man cleared his throat,

and turned back to the piece

Jack had painted only nights ago. 

“His piece had black lines

on a sheet of paper eleven years 

ago. I swear I remember it like

yesterday.” They debated 

just as men did when they

questioned why coffee 

couldn’t just be 

in a simple cup 

and come out of a 

simple machine 

like it did 

some twenty years ago.

The first man, among the  experts, 

slapped the back of his hand

into the other and said, 

“My granddaughter can 

make art better than this …

why, that’s all it has …

a six-year-old’s 

qualifications.”

But I guess it never matters 

what type of art  Jack or the 

others create. Viewers will

see and believe only what

they wish to as if they’re

six, and believe in the tales

told at story time.  

The circle of men crowded at the museum 

missed the most beautiful view of Jack when

the bright pink at the very top showed his

daughter, Corrie, skipping in a skirt, and

the gold lines over the white were the 

champagne stars upon that skirt.  In the

neon greens that the experts said 

he’d simply splashed across was the

field where she’d helped her father 

clear the debris from a tornado 

that left metal twisted

and tangled in the trees.

In the blue of the paint, the experts claimed

Jack showed no art at all, yet while they

favored the art with Jesus Christ on a

crucifix, they never observed the man

they wished, within their souls, they

could be

when he walked to the podium

to speak about  

his daughter 

at her funeral. 

The men claimed that the 

purple lines in the paint showed a 

six-year-old’s 

qualifications.

They failed to view Jack, who has

picked up and organized 

layers of bricks and dirt

for a memorial garden

with purple flowers 

just for his little girl.

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